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Sta.sh
pretty good work!
Feathers through the window create a superb atmosphere and so do the light and the smoke. The model is between the first and the second third and lower than the middle of the frame so technically is a really good composition except (maybe) for one thing: on the right there's a window half opened which allows the observer to see something. Probably a tree I don't know but it may be a little distracting.
I think there's a choice you made that I can't understand: why using a reflector panel to light the ceiling? I know there's certainly a meaning.
To keep the background readable you kept the door open and you did good, giving even more depth to the photo.
Take my lines as questions more than notes please.
Thank you for sharing your work.
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