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April 15, 2012
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Critique by ~nazag Jun 10, 2012, 3:27:27 AM
Background; lighting color objects suits well with model's dress, but showing tools with almost same color with the hair of of model at backstage makes it confusing. Front lighting is too much "at least for me" and gives an impression of re-touch/edit of the photo is overdone. The looks of the model gives me creeps, i don't know how much you worked on getting this look and if you make deliberately. I am just saying. Color chart of the photograph is impressive, hard to get along with black and yellow at the same time.

Fonts could be more thin, bold is not best choice and arrangement of the writings does not follow an inside order.

Overall as a watcher of you, it is easy for me to see your technique and professional touch in this work, but this work has strict boundaries.
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Critique by ~BugattiRyno Apr 16, 2012, 9:28:46 AM
I think the overall theme and look of the image is really cool and that your skin is absolutely soft but looking at it in full res it seems as if the image have been cropped or something as the crisp detail isn't there. It gives the impression that its not in absolute focus but other than that I like the image.. Your lighting is done really nicely.. I would be proud if that was my creation..

What ever the reason for the soft image.. whether its because you cropped or whatever I think you have learned your lesson and that we can only expect brilliant stuff from you next time..

Also try her taking the arm which is just hanging and incorporate it with her pose.. Let her bring it over her head or something..



But after everything mentioned I have to say Well done.
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